This game is currently being completely rewritten 


Features:

Customize your character's ,appearance and personality

Build friendships and fall in love

Overcome the past


Ro's:


Richard Griffin

Occupation: Captain of Lord Hawthorne's guard

Quote:"I may not show it, but your presence means more to me than I let on."

Race: Human

"Richard Griffin stands as a groundbreaking figure, being the first human to regard you as an equal. Behind his brusque exterior, he navigates life with a surprising tenderness, treating everything with careful consideration and genuine kindness. Although not naturally inclined towards sociability, his rare interactions leave a lasting impact on those around him.

However, an enigmatic air surrounds him, hinting at deeper emotions beneath the surface. There's an evident ache in his eyes when focused on someone specific. Could you be the one to unravel the complexities of his heart?





Zephyra Sinclair

Occupation:The Healer

Related to: Cassiel Sinclair

Quote:"Every conversation with you feels like a delightful dance of wit and charm."

Race: Faerie

"Zephyra Sinclair, a vibrant and compassionate Faerie, stands as one of the most revered and esteemed figures in Shadowreach. Despite her elevated status, she radiates an inherent humility, seeing all beings as equals. In the midst of countless admirers, she holds a particular interest in you, extending a special kindness and attention.

 Zephyra's gaze towards you is marked by genuine fascination and unwavering warmth—a glance that has the power to envelop any being in a sense of comfort and affection.

However, beneath the warmth in her expressive, warm brown eyes, there lies a hidden depth. There's an unmistakable sense that she harbors something profound, concealed from the world."



Astaroth Hawthorne

Occupation: The Distractor

Related to: Lord Hawthorne

Race: Angel

Quote:"I can't stop thinking about you, and I don't want to."

"Astoroth, though not Lord Hawthorne's biological son, was taken in by him after a chance encounter in the streets. Found there, his small, shivering frame concealed by wings, drenched in rain, Astoroth was brought into the Hawthorne household. Raised believing in Hawthorne's goodness—towards him, at least—despite the contrary treatment of others. With a charming and affable demeanor, Astoroth's smile easily captivates and influences anyone he encounters.

Astoroth Hawthorne is akin to the forbidden fruit—seemingly unattainable to all, yet he might be willing to make an exception. It's as though everyone can sense that Astoroth would yield to your desires. Since the moment he laid eyes on you, he has actively sought your company at every opportunity.

It appears that you, too, might be this forbidden fruit. Will you allow Astoroth Hawthorne to partake? The question lingers, ripe with potential desires and risks."





Cassiel Sinclair

Occupation: The Herbalist

Related to: Zephyra Sinclair

Race: Elf

Quote:"You have a way of making me feel appreciated for who I am."

"Cassiel Sinclair, Zephyra's adopted sister, embodies a serene and demure presence. A reserved beauty by nature, her demeanor reflects a quiet grace. Raised under the nurturing care and affection of Zephyra's parents, Cassiel was enveloped in kindness, love, and warmth, possessing everything an elf like you might desire. Under the Sinclairs' guardianship, she is esteemed and treated with utmost respect.

Will you be the one to invoke a rosy flush upon her cheeks each time she catches sight of you? Or will you perceive only pity within those gentle, compassionate eyes?"




Hruk ???

Occupation: The Killer

Race: Hybrid

Quote: "Do you believe in love at first sight, or should I walk by again?"

Hruk is a mystery




Eowyn Grim

Occupation: The Thief

Race: Demon(Succubus)

Quote:"Come closer, darling. Let me show you pleasures beyond your wildest dreams."

"Eowyn Grim embodies the allure of an arrogant yet captivating demon. Her charm effortlessly grants her entry into any place, while her flirtatious nature seeks to ensnare your attention at every opportunity. Lord Hawthorne has tasked you with hunting her down to recover a package she stole, though the reasons behind the theft remain shrouded in mystery, as he deliberately keeps silent about its contents and significance.

The choice stands before you: will you succumb to her beguiling charms, form an unlikely friendship, or be the agent of her downfall?"


Secret Ro!;)

Occupation: The Mercenary

Quote:"I'm not easy to read, but I have a feeling you're up for the challenge."


Other link:https://dashingdon.com/play/mch/bleeding-embers/mygame/

Tumblr: https://www.tumblr.com/blog/bleedingembersmch

Hopefully it doesn't turn out too bad!<3

StatusIn development
PlatformsHTML5
Rating
Rated 4.8 out of 5 stars
(4 total ratings)
AuthorMC.H
GenreInteractive Fiction
TagsAdult, Character Customization, Fantasy, Romance

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The game is short but has potential. I'm curious to know how the MC got into such a terrible situation.

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Hey ! This has potential, your characters seem cool, I'd be happy to see where the story is going :)
I just have a few questions/remarks : at some point, you go from "you" to "I", and from present tense to past tense. Was it intentional ?
Also, I love the poetic style of the descriptions, but I feel it is sometimes damaged by repetitions of a word from a sentence to another (whisper, echo, groan, weave...) Maybe it's a choice, and a matter of personal taste (I may be the only one bothered by this, if so, apologies) but just in case it's inattention, I thought I'd signal it. I write too, and it's stuff I do sometimes, that's why it caught my eye ^^
Again, I like where this is headed ! And I'm sorry if my comment comes of as rude or harsh, it's not the intention ! I love reading people's stories, and I want to read the rest of yours !
I just wanted to help a bit by sharing some things that stroke me as odd
Have a good day !

That’s not rude at all, thank you so much for the feedback it’s really appreciated! I’ll definetely make use of this and hopefully make it better. This is my first time writing a story like this and I’ll try to change it up a bit. Thank you so much!<3

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Well ewww to that dude calling MC his. Also Hruk's quote made me really laugh. This was a very nice start! 😇

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LOL, who knows maybe you won’t mind being his;)

I’m glad you enjoyed it!,Im busy with chapter 1 will hopefully release it before November ends<3

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Can't wait for more